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Not to sound arrogant or full of myself, but I thought I'd post it again for anyone who hasn't read it or would like to read it again. This isn't the entire episode. It's two parts of it that I've always wanted to try writing. I've been told it's not bad.

Captain’s log, stardate 4202.9. What began as a routine star charting mission has become a bewildering search for our sister ship, the Constellation. All we have to go on is a garbled distress call which was cut off in mid-transmission. In the course of our search, we’ve discovered several star systems that have apparently suffered some type of cataclysmic event. They show nova-level destruction of all their respective planets, but the stars themselves are intact. My intuition tells me this and the distress call are not coincidental.

Kirk switched off the log recorder and stood to begin pacing slowly around the bridge. The bridge crew all knew quite well that this was an indication of deep worry.

“Sir?” came Sulu’s voice; “We’re now coming within the limits of system L-374. Scanners show the same evidence of destruction.”

“Every star system in this sector blasted to rubble….” Kirk was almost mumbling as he circled the bridge, “…and still no sign of the Constellation.” He approached Spock. “It’s Matt Decker’s ship.. What the hell could have happened?”

Spock stood up from his scanner. “Captain, the two innermost planets in this system appear to be intact.”

“Captain,” Comm Officer Palmer said, “I’m picking up the Constellation again….” Her voice then lowered dramatically, her eyes meeting Kirk’s. “Sir, it’s a disaster beacon…”

A sobering statement for Kirk and the bridge crew. A Star Fleet vessel’s automatic disaster beacon only activated if the bulk of her crew were dead and the ship was all but destroyed.

“Try to raise her, Lt.” Kirk ordered.

Spock again bent to look into his viewer. “Have her on sensors, Captain….I read extremely low energy output…She appears to be drifting.”

“No answer, Captain,” Palmer said; “All I get is the automatic beacon.” .

“Approach course, Mr. Sulu.” Kirk said.

The bridge crew sat in stunned silence as the Constellation came into view on the screen. Kirk broke the drone of the bridge instruments, speaking in a gruff near whisper.

“My God; look at that.”

Constellation had clearly been through a war. A sizable chunk of her saucer section was missing. The remainder showed numerous, huge, blackened gouges as did her secondary hull. Her nacelles were charred, fused lumps with the aft part of the starboard one missing as well. She’d obviously been hit repeatedly by some incredibly powerful weapon. Hadley and Sulu exchanged shocked looks, as did Palmer and Leslie. None of them were prepared to see a mighty Constitution Class Starship in this condition. It was quite humbling and more than a little frightening. This poor grand lady could no longer even be thought of as a ship. She was a wreck.

Spock said “High probability she was wrecked by whatever destroyed these star systems.”.

“She was attacked…” Kirk declared as he stepped down to the command chair and pressed the internal comm button. “RED ALERT…RED ALERT…MAN YOUR BATTLE STATIONS.”

***************************The Doomsday Machine****************************** ****************************by Norman Spinrad********************************* **************************An Adaption by Jetfire59*******************************

As the familiar intercom chatter resulting from his order filled the air, Kirk began pacing again; glancing every few seconds at the view screen. What could have done this to a heavy cruiser? Sulu broke his train of thought.

“Captain, all stations show alert status. Weapons armed and ready.”

“Very good,” Kirk replied. “Initiate a full sensor scan of the immediate area for any other vessels.”

“Aye, sir.”

Kirk moved to the comm station. “Lt. Palmer?”

“I can’t raise the Constellation, sir.” she answered, ” I’m still getting the disaster beacon, but there is heavy subspace interference. It's almost blocking the signal.”

Kirk gave her a nod. “Keep trying”. He then approached Spock. “Your analysis of the damage to the Constellation?”

“All power plants dead.” Spock replied. “Her warp core was apparently jettisoned. Reserve energy banks operating at a very low power level.”

“Life support?”.

“Also operating at a low power level.” Spock continued. “She obviously has a number of hull breaches including the bridge. It is open to vacuum and uninhabitable.”

“No power for the emergency force fields…” Kirk speculated.

“A logical assumption.” Spock said. “The remaining sections seem able to sustain life.”

“Any life readings?’

“Indeterminate,” Spock replied. “The subspace interference makes readings difficult.”

Sulu spoke next. “Captain, as near as I can tell with the interference, there are no other vessels in the area.”

“Keep a sharp eye out, Mr. Sulu.”

“Aye, sir.”

Kirk moved to the command chair and again hit the comm button. “All hands stand down to Yellow Alert. Go to stand by battle stations.” He then moved toward the turbo-lift. “Lt. Palmer, have Dr. McCoy, Mr. Scott and a damage control party meet me in the transporter room.” He looked at Spock. “We’ll board her. You have the con.”

“Acknowledged.” Spock replied.

Constellation‘s interior looked almost as bad as her exterior. Kirk and McCoy looked around at the burnt conduit and wiring that littered the corridor they beamed into as the damage control team reported.

“Radiation level normal.”

“Atmospheric pressure eleven pounds PSI.”

“The filtration systems are out, sir.”

Scotty spoke last. “The comm system looks to be shorted out, too, sir.”

“Scotty, get down to Engineering.” Kirk ordered. “And check the weapons. See if they’ve been fired.”

“Aye, sir,” Scott replied. “Come along, lads.” The three followed Scott down the ladder leading to Engineering.

“Bones, with me.” Kirk continued, “See what you can get on your tricorder,” McCoy began scanning as he followed Kirk down the corridor to a briefing room. The doors were partially open. They squeezed through the opening and looked around.

“No clutter,” Kirk said, “No half empty coffee cups. Whatever happened didn’t happen without a warning.” He opened his communicator. “Kirk to Enterprise.”

“Spock here.” came the Vulcan’s voice through a barrage of static. “Having trouble reading you, Captain.”

“Same here. We’ve found no survivors. No bodies, either. Is it possible they beamed down to one of those two planets?”

“Unlikely, Captain.” Spock replied. “Neither is Class M. The surface temperature of the inner one is roughly that of molten lead. The other has an atmosphere poisonous to human life.”

“Alright. We’ll continue our search. Kirk out.”

McCoy closed the screen of his tricorder in disgust. “This thing’s useless, Jim. It won’t scan beyond a few feet.”

“The subspace interference.” Kirk speculated, “I could barely read Spock.”

“Must be.”

They moved back into the corridor just as Scott stepped off the ladder.

“Captain? Most of Engineering is a junkyard.” he reported. “I didn’t even bother with the warp drive. The impulse engines aren’t too badly off. We oughta be able to do something with them.”

“Weapons?” Kirk asked.

“The phaser banks are exhausted.” Scott replied. “I sent Lt. Elliot down to check the torpedo bay.”

As if on cue, Scotts’ communicator beeped. “Lt. Elliot to Mr. Scott.”

“Go ahead, lad.”

“Sir, about two thirds of the torpedo load is gone. The only reason they stopped firing is because the launchers took a hit. They’re a mess.”

“Lt., this is the Captain.” Kirk spoke up. “Have you seen any bodies?”

“No, sir. Not a one.”

“Alright, Lt.” Scott said, “Get back to Engineering and start a diagnostic on the impulse reactor.”

“Aye, sir. On my way. Elliot out.”

“Sounds like they put up a hell of a fight.” McCoy said softly.

“Aye” Scott agreed, “With the divil’imself, from the looks of it…”.

Kirk sighed. ” But where are they? I’ve known Matt Decker for 20 years. I can’t imagine him abandoning ship while his life support systems are still operative.”

“Barely operative, Jim.” McCoy said. “The shape they’re in, they wouldn’t have sustained the entire crew for more than a few hours. I'm going to check Sickbay.”

"Wait, Doctor," Scott said, "There's a small hull breach in that area. No life support."

"But that's the best protected area of the ship!" McCoy replied.

"Doctor, whatever hit this ship is extremely powerful. It cut through the hull like it was haggis."

"Damn" McCoy spat.

"It would have been a relatively slow decompression, Doctor. I'm sure they were able to evacuate."

"Let's hope so."

“Lemli’s checking the computer system.” Scott said to Kirk. “We may be able to get a captain’s log in auxiliary control.” He again opened his comm unit. “Scott to Ensign Lemli.”

“Lemli here, sir. I was just about to call you. Except for some peripherals, the computer system appears to be intact.”

“Fine, lad.” Scott replied as he followed Kirk and McCoy toward auxiliary control, “You and Washburn start a diagnostic on the control systems. I’ll be back down there shortly.”

“Aye, sir. Lemli out.”

The doors to the auxiliary control room were also partially open. Kirk squeezed through and was astonished at what he saw. Sitting slumped over the helm console was a disheveled Commodore Matthew Decker. He immediately moved to grab Decker’s shoulders and sat him upright.

“Matt?” Kirk said softly, “Matt, It’s Jim Kirk..”

McCoy came through next and approached Decker, placing a hand under his unshaven chin and turning his head to face him. Scott sat down at the navigation console and began accessing the computer banks..

“Commodore?” McCoy said softly, “Commodore Decker?”

The commodore’s eyes were glazed and seemingly staring at nothing. McCoy pulled his med scanner from his kit, running it over the Commodore’s upper body. He then produced a hypo spray, injecting him in the shoulder. Decker’s eyes gradually became aware. He looked at Kirk.

“It’s Kirk…Oh, it’s Jim Kirk..”

“What happened here, Matt?” Kirk asked. “What did this to your ship?”

“Ship?” Decker mumbled. “Attacked…that…that thing..”

“What thing?” Kirk pressed. “What was it?” Decker remained silent, his face now showing raw horror. Kirk’s patience expired. He gripped Decker’s shoulders and shook him. “Answer me! What was it? What happened, Matt?”

“Jim!” McCoy snapped in his authoritative voice. “Ease off! He’s in shock! Give him a minute!”

Scott spoke next . “Ready with the log, sir.”

“Go.”Kirk replied, still looking at Decker.

Decker’s voice came from the speaker. “Captain’s log, stardate 4202.1. Exceptionally heavy subspace interference is still blocking all comm channels. We’ve been unable to inform Star Fleet of the destroyed star systems we’ve encountered. We are now approaching system L-374. Science Officer Masada reports that fourth planet seems to be breaking up. We are going to investigate.”

“Fourth planet..” Kirk said. “And there are only two left now. Scotty, pull the microtapes from the sensor memory banks and beam them over to Spock. I want a full report of what happened when they approached that planet.”

“Aye, sir.”

“We tried to contact Star Fleet…” Decker said raggedly,”…but the interference was like hitting a wall….We overloaded the subspace transmitter trying to penetrate it… We…we couldn’t run….”

“What happened to your crew?” Kirk said softly.”

“Oh, I had to beam them down…” Decker continued. As he spoke, his voice began noticeably emotional. “We were dead….No weapons………On emergency life support….I stayed behind…..Captain…Last man aboard the ship…..That’s the tradition, isn’t it? And then it hit again and the …the transporter went out….and I’m stuck here.”

"What hit?" Kirk asked, "What attacked you?"

"They say there's no devil, Jim," Decker said in a trembling voice. "But there is.....right out of Hell..."

“Matt,” Kirk pressed, “Where’s your crew?”

The Commodore spoke barely above a whisper as he replied.

“On the third planet.”

“Matt, there is no third planet….”

Decker’ eyes were full of pain and grief as they met Kirk’s. His voice remained a deep almost whisper.

“Don’t you think I know that?” he said as he began to sob. “There was…They called me…they begged me for help! Four hundred of them!!…..I couldn’t…”

His voice trailed off as he dropped his face into his hands. Scott had been quietly conversing with Washburn who stood inside the auxiliary control rooms’s circuitry bay.

“Captain…” he said softly, “Washburn has a report…”

Kirk walked slowly over to the bay’s mesh wall as his eyes remained on the inconsolable Commodore. He slowly tuned to face his two engineers.

“Go.”

“We’ve run a a full check on power and control systems, sir,” Washburn reported. “The warp core was automatically ejected when they lost anti-matter containment; probably after the second or third hit from some massive energy beam. After that, it came through the deflectors like they weren’t even there.”

“Any ideas about the weapon?” Kirk queried.

“Yessir, ” Washburn continued,” Like nothing we’e ever scene….the energy signature reads as anti-proton…”

“It is..” Came Decker’s voice again. “It’s absolutely pure…You’re right, Lt.. The deflectors withstood three hits before they were gone… ”

He took a long deep breath and went on slowly.

“Then it started tearing chunks of out us….”

“What’s it look like?” Kirk asked.

“Well, it’s roughly cone-shaped…..and it’s miles long. The open end is big enough to swallow half of Star Fleet…”

“What is it?” Kirk began, “An alien ship? or is it alive? Or…”

“Both!” Decker interrupted, “Or neither; I don’t know…”

"Matt, your log stated that the fourth planet was breaking up.." Kirk said. "You went in to investigate....."

"We saw this thing hovering over the planet," Decker replied. Literally slicing out chunks of it with that damned beam..."

"Anti proton?'

Decker nodded. "Like your Lt. said: nothing we've ever seen before...absolutely pure."

Kirk's communicator beeped.

"Kirk here."

"Spock here, Captain." came the Vulcan's voice again through static. "Unable to raise Star Fleet due to the interference. Attempting to remedy."

"What about the Constellation's tapes?" Kirk asked.

"She was attacked by what appears to a robot.An automated weapon of immense size and power. Its apparent function is to smash planets to rubble and then digest the debris for fuel. It is, therefore, self sustaining as long as there are planetary bodies for it to feed on."

TBC

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“Mr. Spock,” Palmer said, “We’ve managed to pierce the interference locally.”

“Can you raise Star Fleet?” Spock asked.

“No, sir,” she replied. “But I’ve got ship to ship back. Picking up Captain Kirk.”

“On audio, Lt.”

Kirk’s worried, frustrated voice came over the speaker.

“Kirk to Enterprise….Enterprise, come in…”

Spock moved to the comm station but Decker interjected. “Mr. Spock, I am still in command and I will speak for this ship.” He hit the chair’s comm switch. ” Enterprise to Kirk. Commodore Decker speaking.”

“Matt?” Kirk replied, “What’s going on? Give me Mr. Spock.”

“I’m in command here, Jim.” Decker said confidently.

“What happened to Spock?”

“Nothing. I assumed command according to regulations since your first officer was reluctant to take aggressive action against…”

Kirk cut him off.

“YOU MEAN YOU’RE THE LUNATIC THAT PUT MY SHIP THROUGH THAT BEATING!?!?”

“You are speaking to a senior officer, Kirk.”

“Give me Spock…”

“I told you I am in command here, according to every rule in the book Captain.” Decker declared. “If you have anything to say at all, you will say it to me.”

“There’s only one thing I want to say to you, Commodore. YOU GET MY SHIP OUT OF THERE!!”

Kirk took a deep breath and continued. “Commander Spock, if you can hear my voice, I order you to answer me!”

Palmer quickly nodded to Spock, indicating that the comm station’s response mike was open.

“Spock here, Captain.”

“Good……. ship status?”

Before Spock could reply, Decker again interjected. “Down here, Commander…” He motioned for Spock to move down beside the command chair. Spock complied.

“No casualties, Captain. Warp drive out. Deflectors down. We’ve taken one minor hull breach but the emergency force field is in place. Transporter under repair. We are on emergency impulse power.”

“How long to repair warp drive?” Kirk asked.

“At least one solar day. At our present rate of consumption, we’ll exhaust our impulse power long before then.”

Sulu spoke abruptly. “It’s gaining on us, sir!”

“Take evasive action, Mr. Sulu…” Kirk ordered.

“I told you I am in command here, Captain.” Decker snapped. “We are going to turn and attack…”

“Not with MY ship you don’t!” Kirk replied. “Mr. Spock, relieve Commodore Decker immediately. That’s a direct order.”

“You can’t relieve me and you know it!” Decker began. “According to regulations….”

“BLAST REGULATIONS!” Kirk shouted. “Mr. Spock, I order you to assume command on my personal authority as Captain of the Enterprise“.

Spock moved closer to the command chair. “Commodore Decker, you are relieved of command.”

Decker met Spock’s eyes then looked away, speaking with pure arrogance. “I don’t recognize your authority to relieve me.”

Spock continued. “You may file a formal protest with Star Fleet Command assuming we survive to reach a starbase. But you are relieved.”

Decker ignored him

“Commodore, I do not wish to place you under arrest.”

Decker abruptly stopped fiddling with the computer tapes in his hand and again met Spock’s gaze. “You wouldn’t dare…”

Standing beside the turbolift doors, security guards Russ and Montgomery had been watching Spock’s every move from the instant this mad man had usurped command. Rank be damned. If so ordered, they were quite prepared to haul Decker out of the command chair and off the bridge; especially since contact had been re-established with the Captain. When Spock finally gave the gesture they were waiting for, they practically leaped to the Vulcan’s aid. They moved to stand on either side of the command chair, giving Decker a menacing look.

Decker looked from Montgomery to Russ, then at Spock. “You’re bluffing.”

But even as he said the words, Decker knew they weren’t true. The iron clad loyalty of this particular starship’s crew was known only too well throughout Star Fleet; as was the unswerving manner of her Executive Officer. Decker almost knew what Spock was going to say before he spoke.

“Vulcans never bluff.”

Decker sighed in resignation. “No…..no, I don’t suppose that they do.” He set the microtapes on the chair arm and stood up. “Very well, Mr. Spock. The bridge is yours.” He moved to the upper level as Spock sat in the command chair. “Captain, I’ve assumed command.” Spock said.

“Good, ” Kirk said, “Now, Mr. Spock…”

“One moment, sir.” Spock interrupted. He then spoke over his shoulder. “Commodore, I believe you are scheduled for medical examination. Mr. Montgomery…?”

Montgomery stepped forward. “Sir?”

“You will accompany the Commodore to sickbay, please.”

“Aye, sir..” Montgomery said as he gestured toward the turbolift. “Commodore….?”

Spock spoke into the chair’s comm panel as the two entered the turbo lift. “Captain, we are taking an evasive course back to you. We will try to stay ahead of the machine until we can beam you aboard.”

“Fine,” Kirk replied, “Just make sure you stay ahead of it.”

Montgomery’s first mistake was lowering his guard a bit. As he and Decker stepped out of the turbo lift on deck seven en-route to Sickbay, The Commodore faked a cough and backhanded him, then made a grab for his phaser. His second mistake was pulling his punches. This man was a Flag Officer and not in his right mind due to grief. He would later regret that decision. The two exchanged blows for a few seconds, sending the phaser skittering across the floor. The last thing Montgomery remembered was Decker scooping it up and aiming it at him.

On the bridge, Sulu was doing his routine scan of the status board when an indicator he didn’t expect to see began flashing. “Mr. Spock,” he said over his shoulder, “The hangar bay doors are opening..”

“Override and shut them, Mr. Sulu.” Spock replied.

“It’s too late, sir. Premature launch. Shuttlecraft away. It’s the Columbus.”

Kirk glanced up from the Constellation‘s auxiliary helm console at the view screen. Like Sulu, this was the last thing he expected to see. He opened his communicator. “Kirk to Enterprise, why the hell are you launching a shuttlecraft?”

“Whoever it is, Captain, has no authorization.” Spock replied. He spoke to Palmer. “Lt., raise the shuttlecraft.”

Aboard the Columbus, Decker stared at the planet killer as it grew in size in the view ports; the terrified voices of his crew ringing in his ears. He’d tried to repair the cargo transporter to no avail and there was no power to the hangar bay doors. He couldn’t even be down there to die with them. The memory of Masada’s last words hit him like a torpedo.

“Commodore, it’s been an honor and a privilege serving with you, sir.”

Tears welled up in his eyes. Garth Masada had been a fine young officer who was well on his way to commanding a ship of his own.

And he had murdered him.

Just as surely as if he’d cut his throat. It was the same with the rest of the crew. He had the blood of over four hundred people on his hands. Lt. Palmer’s voice finally pierced the haze he was in.

“Enterprise to shuttlecraft Columbus, come in, Columbus. Come in, Columbus.” He hit the reply button. “Columbus to Enterprise. Decker here.”

“Commodore,” came Spock’s voice, “I must insist that you reverse course and return to the ship.”

Decker’s voice sounded tired.

“You said it yourself, Spock. There is no way to blast through the hull of that damned thing; so I’m going to shove a fusion explosion down its throat.”

“Matt, this is JIm” came Kirk’s voice, “You’ll be killed.”

“I’ve been prepared for death ever since I…”. Decker’s voice deepened with emotion. “Ever since I killed my crew.”

“No one expects you to die for an error in judgement.” Kirk said.

His ship’s surgeon, Dr. Warren Ostrow, had been a friend for decades. He’d delivered Decker’s son. Kirk’s words almost echoed his.

“Matt, you can’t blame yourself for this…We all agreed it was the only option.”

It was the very last thing he’d heard before the planet broke up.

“A starship commander is responsible for the lives of his crew….”. Decker said softly. “And for their deaths. Well…. I should have died with mine.”

“Commodore,” Spock said, “It’s doubtful you will succeed. Your only logical alternative is to return to the ship.”

“Matt, listen to me…” Kirk pressed, “You can’t throw your life away like this..Think about Will. He’s already lost one parent…..What would you have me say to him?”

“He grew up with Star Fleet, Jim. He’ll understand. He got past Leigh Anne’s death. He’s a strong boy. He’ll be fine.”

Kirk’s memory quickly flashed back to Leigh Anne Decker. She’d been a stunningly beautiful woman and the very essence of a Star Fleet wife. An aircraft accident on Earth had taken her life six years ago.

“Matt, you’re a starship commander. That makes you a valuable commodity.” Kirk said, “We need you. Your experience, your judgement. DAMMIT, MATT, WE’RE STRONGER WITHYOU THAN WITHOUT YOU!”

He then spoke to his first officer. “Spock! Get a tractor beam on that shuttlecraft!”

Spock looked over to the Engineering station where Lt. Leslie gave him a grim shake of his head. “Sorry, sir.”

“Tractor beam generators non-functional, Captain.” Spock reported.

As he stared down the planet killer’s throat, Decker’s eyes were full of loathing as he recalled a passage from a book he and Will had read together.

From Hell’s heart I stab at thee….For Hate’s sake, I spit my last breath at thee.

Kirk, Scott, the damage control team and the Enterprise bridge crew all watched in helpless frustration as the shuttle disappeared into the machine’s maw.

A few seconds later, Hadley spoke softly from Spock’s station. “Sir, the Columbus just detonated.”

Spock gave a slow nod.

“He’s gone.”

TO BE CONTINUED

Always interested, waiting for the next part of the story. relaxed

Thanks for the interest, w2w. I'm trying to work up the gumption to continue the adaption. I have tweaked these two parts a bit if you care to re-read it. For one, I got to thinking that McCoy would want to check Constellation's sickbay. But he can't.

Why would McCoy want to go to the Constellation's sickbay? Could there have been someone left behind (forgotten)? A stowaway?
That would certainly add more drama.

My thinking is, as a dedicated physician, he would want to see if there were any bodies in Sickbay since they found none in the rest of the ship. It just seemed to me that McCoy would automatically want to check out Sickbay. Do you disagree?

That's logical. Spock would concur. wink

Also, that's what McCoy did on the Defiant in The Tholian Web.

@Knixon said:

Also, that's what McCoy did on the Defiant in The Tholian Web.

Wow, Knix. You're actually supporting my position? Have we slipped into an alternate universe?

Fascinating

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