it better to be a short film.
the characters don't have any logic. idk perhaps its a fiction? when you're trapped in a room and the police came, and you have a visual. what you gonna do? screaming?? I would make an ear-splitting noise to get the police's attention, man.
the climax isn't that peak. the reunion doesn't satisfy you enough. you guys just chill like it's normal and you're used to this situation.
I'm sorry, I just disappointed. but the story is good. interesting. but the execution doesn't pay well.