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Grammatical errors in overview
10:33 ÖÖ tarihinde r 12, 2022 tarihinde Arthur ZeySTAFFMOD tarafından gönderildi
Version as of this post, with errors:
In the not so distant future, Theodore, a lonely writer purchases a newly developed operating system designed to meet the user's every needs. To Theodore's surprise, a romantic relationship develops between him and his operating system. This unconventional love story blends science fiction and romance in a sweet tale that explores the nature of love and the ways that technology isolates and connects us all.
The errors:
- There should be a comma after "a lonely writer", which is an apposition and therefore requires being surrounded by commas.
- "needs" should be "need", as in "meet the user's every need", since the word "every" must be followed by a singular noun or noun phrase.
Corrected version:
In the not so distant future, Theodore, a lonely writer, purchases a newly developed operating system designed to meet the user's every need. To Theodore's surprise, a romantic relationship develops between him and his operating system. This unconventional love story blends science fiction and romance in a sweet tale that explores the nature of love and the ways that technology isolates and connects us all.